Thursday, July 29, 2010

*****ALL NEW CHAPTERS!!!*****

Okay this time, I'm for really, it's an ALL NEW chapter never before seen before today, except by me, and so its new and so you must read >:D

Notice: Some people may take offense to what is written here, and to those people I say my bad >.> Now onwards to story XP

PS. This is mostly just filler >.>

13. Letty- Phones Are Ever So Useful

I looked around, noticing that some of the class were missing. Especially a certain boy...
Counting up the people who were missing, I found Chris, Kyle, Joseph, Jaycob and Josh, all gone. I kinda knew them a little bit, but was especially concerned with Chris, who never ditched and was never late for class. With a sudden urge to find him, I decided to search for him after school.
As the bell sounded three thirty, I hurried out of the class and out of the school to look for him. If he's ditching with the others...
After borrowing a friend’s phone, I texted him.

Wher R U? (Letty)

A few minutes later, I got an answer.

Hi Letty, and umm.. I rly don’t kno.

My brow furrowed in suspicion as I replied.

Wht R U talkin bout? O.o

U wouldnt believe me if I told U. Lets just say a bunch of stuff happened and now idk where I am o.o

Whos with U?

Kyle, Jaycob, Joseph

Hmph, I knew it. Before I could ask if he was ditching, he sent another text.

Umm, i g2g, cya l8r, serious sht goin on atm, i rly in trouble

You bet you're in trouble; with ME. I tried to text him again, but he wouldn't answer. I need to find him... Ahah! After returning the phone, I ran back into the school, looking for a certain hacker type person. He had a history of hacking things, and I was sure he could track Chris's phone. Well, for the right price.
 
14. Chris- Captured
 
I walked around in a general westwards direction, following the sun, which was slowly making its way down to the horizon. After a long while I finally found the road, and I also happened to recieve a text message. It was from Letty, wondering where I was. I replied that I didn't know, and after a little while of texting her, I saw a truck approaching, and it was pretty big, and pretty armored. And it seemed to heading right towards- JUMP!
I jumped at the last second as the fast moving vehicle attempted to run me over. Just barely missed me... Got my pants all dusty now. I growled as I texted Letty one last time, then pocketed my phone and readied a fireball. I was planning on hitting it as it zoomed away, but it actually turned around to face me now. This guy is obviously trying to kill me, so I'm not responsible if I blow him up. It charged towards and I hurled my fireball right into its windshield, but it just went right through the fire.
I readied another fireball, this time aiming at its wheels. If I can't blow it up, I can at least disable it. But just then, I heard another truck coming at me from the other direction. The first truck took advantage of this distraction and quickly netted me. As I struggled to get free, the net electrified me and easily subdued me.
Now only semi-conscious, the men jumped out of the back of the truck and tossed me in. The last thing I saw was the symbol Binetics Corp. before I fell into deep unconsciouseness.

Saturday, July 24, 2010

**ALL NEW**

Sorry for the big capital letters and stars >.> But yeah, its a sort of kind of brand new chapter! :D After 9 and 10 would be the Joseph- Stones, crap whatever aisle, where he meets the three main characters and gets his powers. Now we've got the strongest elements under our control, Fire, Electricity, Wind, and Earth. So we've gotta have a fight to see who's better <.< Before i spoil the rest, just read

(PS. We don't get to the fight yet, it's just kinda talk >.>)


12. Kyle- Relocated

Chris grinned as he patted the newcomer Joseph on the back, “Thanks for getting us out of there, bud.”

Joseph nodded in response, then held up the crystal sphere, “This thing is awesome.” He brought up a small pillar of stone, lightly grinning as he whispered to himself, “I got Earth, and the Jaycob guy has Wind...”, then turned to me and Chris, “What’re your guys’ powers?”

Chris merely conjured up a fireball in his right hand and tossed it onto Joseph’s stone pillar, starting an unnatural fire atop it. Joseph nodded again in awe then turned to me, “How bout you?”

I grinned as I snapped my fingers and sent a bolt of electricty at the flaming stone pillar, effectively exploding it in a burst of light, "Looks like Thunder trumps Fire."

Chris scoffed, "You wish, Fire beats all your powers."

Jaycob exclaimed, "Wind puts out your Fire!"

"Ever heard of fanning the flames?" he stuck his tongue out.

"Stop bickering like little kids. It's obvious Earth can destroy all your powers; Sand puts out Fire, Rock absorbs Electricity, and Stone resists Wind. So hah!"

"You wanna try that on a more personal level?" I said, grinning evilly, "I'm not sure your body could absorb Electricity for too long."

Jospeh laughed, "I'd just bury you."

Jaycob chimed in, "Not if I distracted you."

I grinned at Jaycob for the backup, then turned to Chris, "You joining in on the Jospeh massacre?"

He waved a hand at me as he turned away and began texting, "One minute"

I rolled my eyes and sighed heavily as I turned towards Joseph again, "So me and Jaycob versus you. You sure it's fair?"

He shook his head, "You nead way more guys on your team for it to be fair."

I scoffed and grinned as I got into battle position, "Let's just get this over with."

As we were about to begin our completely harmless war between elements, Chris spoke up, "Uh hey guys? Before you begin this massacre thing, where exactly are we?"

I blinked. Crickets chirped in the distance, although it was midday. A collective "Umm...." was the eventual answer.

He sighed and nodded, "I'll catch you guys later, I gotta go look around for some kinda landmark or street or something."

We turned back to each other, "Think we should go help?" asked Joseph.

I nodded, "As soon as we're done here."

"Bring it on" Jospeh grinned.

And brought it hath been.

Saturday, July 3, 2010

The New Chapters 9 and 10

I tweaked and edited nearly All of the chapters a little bit, but the changes aren't really noticeable until chapter 9, and especially the completely new chapter 10. After 10 would be a slightly edited 11, the one where Joseph found the group for the first time, via the bathroom elevator. The story so far is that my character went right and got Fire powers, Kyle and Jaycob went left, and ended up captured, and Joseph's eartquake of doom in the bathroom part already happened, though he hasn't appeared again yet. So this is right after "Chris- An Inferno Is Born", where i got my powers (also slightly edited, but not much different than the original)
So enjoy.


9. Jaycobb- The Wind is Awakened

I heard a loud rumble, shaking the table I lay on. As I attempted to get up, I noticed I was completely strapped to it, unable to even move my head. From what I could see, there was another kid on a table beside me, and a huge machine in front of me. A man was frantically pressing buttons on it, and alarms rang throughout the room. I could hear the man grumbling to himself, "Need to avoid system meltdown... Would destroy the whole machine... Somebody must've taken the crystal... Can't work without it... Master will be most displeased..."

Suddenly, I heard an explosion, and saw blasted metal debris fly across the room. A large chunk of metal knocked out the mad scientist guy, Hope Frankenstein hasn't come back to kill his creator... But then I saw him, surrounded in flames. I should've completely scared, but instead I felt immense relief. That guy looked so cool... After freeing the other guy, he walked over to me, which is when I noticed they were the two students I was following earlier! After removing the straps, I got up and looked around me. It was obviously some kind of experimentation room, including a giant mirror wall, which I could only guess was a one way window.

"Thanks, man, I owe you one." I said to the fire-wielding cool guy.
He grinned and nodded, "Don't mention it. What's your name?"
"Jaycobb" I responded.
He nodded "I'm Chris, this is Kyle" and gestured towards the other guy.

Suddenly the alarms, which had stopped after the explosion, began ringing once again. Soldiers rushed into the room from the previously exploded opening and began shooting at us. Immediatly we ducked down, with the fire guy occasionally shooting fireballs back at them. Beside him was a peculiar-looking crystal sphere. I picked up the curious object and began examining it. I saw my face in the sphere, which was suddenly replaced by a strong breeze. Suddenly, I felt power surging into my body, flowing through me. As i aimed my palm up, I could feel the wind rushing out of my hand. That's when I grinned.

I stood up, knowing bullets were coming at me. And then I did a Neo, completely stopping all of the bullets in midair, then dropping them to the floor. The soldiers stopped shooting and merely gaped at me with wide eyes. I grinned brighter as I shot a blast of air at them, knocking them all off their feet, then looked to my new comrades.
"Let's go!" I yelled to them as I ran out of the room, before the soldiers could recover.

We came out to a hallway, and quickly chose to go right, due to Chris's incessant nagging about it being the "right" way or something. Though Kyle seemed to agree with him. I could only hope that this was truly the "right" way.

10. Kyle-Thunderstorm Appears

"Really, right is always the 'Right' way. If you go left, then you're going the wrong way, because it's not right. Kyle here knows all about that, doesn't he, Kyle?" said Chris as we continued walking down the hallway.
"I didn't even choose right, you said we had to split up, or some shit like that." I replied in irritation.
"Details, details" scoffed Chris.
Jaycob groaned from beside him, "Please stop ittt, you two're giving me a headache!"
"Alright fine, let's talk about you. How'd you get caught up in this mess anyways?" questioned Chris.
Jaycob hesitated a bit as he responded, "Umm.. well.. yeah.. about that.."
Chris rolled his eyes and demanded, "C'mon, spill it, Mr. Jaycob."
"I followed you down the underground path from the school." he said.
Chris laughed softly as he raised an eyebrow, "Oh really? Well, you sir, Mr. Jaycob, are indeed an idiot."
Jaycob scoffed, "No more an idiot than you" and grinned.
Chris grinned back, but before he could come up with a witty response, there was a loud rumbling.
Which reminded me... "Hey guys, can I see the crystal? I asked them.
"For what?" asked Jaycob, who was carrying it right now.
"Just to see if I get any powers. Whatever's making this rumbling noise is big, and you're gonna need as much power as you can get."
Jaycob nodded and passed the crystal sphere to me. As soon as I grasped it, I could its power rushing into me. I felt a shock in my hand, a little tingle which soon crawled up my arm and around my body before flowing into me. I could feel the new power inbued in me, and it was a lot more than a tingle. As i snapped my fingers, I created a spark. A spark of electricity. Awesome, i thought. And it probably would've been awesome-er if the ground hadn't kept rumbling under my feet. I felt dirt falling from above me, and as I looked up, I noticed the ceiling was quite ready to crush us.
As we jumped out of the way, we noticed something in a porcelian color. I couldn't believe my eyes, but it was a bathroom stall, which was still hovering slightly above the ground. After a few seconds, it landed on the ground with a loud thunk! I was completely and utterly in shock.