Thursday, July 29, 2010

*****ALL NEW CHAPTERS!!!*****

Okay this time, I'm for really, it's an ALL NEW chapter never before seen before today, except by me, and so its new and so you must read >:D

Notice: Some people may take offense to what is written here, and to those people I say my bad >.> Now onwards to story XP

PS. This is mostly just filler >.>

13. Letty- Phones Are Ever So Useful

I looked around, noticing that some of the class were missing. Especially a certain boy...
Counting up the people who were missing, I found Chris, Kyle, Joseph, Jaycob and Josh, all gone. I kinda knew them a little bit, but was especially concerned with Chris, who never ditched and was never late for class. With a sudden urge to find him, I decided to search for him after school.
As the bell sounded three thirty, I hurried out of the class and out of the school to look for him. If he's ditching with the others...
After borrowing a friend’s phone, I texted him.

Wher R U? (Letty)

A few minutes later, I got an answer.

Hi Letty, and umm.. I rly don’t kno.

My brow furrowed in suspicion as I replied.

Wht R U talkin bout? O.o

U wouldnt believe me if I told U. Lets just say a bunch of stuff happened and now idk where I am o.o

Whos with U?

Kyle, Jaycob, Joseph

Hmph, I knew it. Before I could ask if he was ditching, he sent another text.

Umm, i g2g, cya l8r, serious sht goin on atm, i rly in trouble

You bet you're in trouble; with ME. I tried to text him again, but he wouldn't answer. I need to find him... Ahah! After returning the phone, I ran back into the school, looking for a certain hacker type person. He had a history of hacking things, and I was sure he could track Chris's phone. Well, for the right price.
 
14. Chris- Captured
 
I walked around in a general westwards direction, following the sun, which was slowly making its way down to the horizon. After a long while I finally found the road, and I also happened to recieve a text message. It was from Letty, wondering where I was. I replied that I didn't know, and after a little while of texting her, I saw a truck approaching, and it was pretty big, and pretty armored. And it seemed to heading right towards- JUMP!
I jumped at the last second as the fast moving vehicle attempted to run me over. Just barely missed me... Got my pants all dusty now. I growled as I texted Letty one last time, then pocketed my phone and readied a fireball. I was planning on hitting it as it zoomed away, but it actually turned around to face me now. This guy is obviously trying to kill me, so I'm not responsible if I blow him up. It charged towards and I hurled my fireball right into its windshield, but it just went right through the fire.
I readied another fireball, this time aiming at its wheels. If I can't blow it up, I can at least disable it. But just then, I heard another truck coming at me from the other direction. The first truck took advantage of this distraction and quickly netted me. As I struggled to get free, the net electrified me and easily subdued me.
Now only semi-conscious, the men jumped out of the back of the truck and tossed me in. The last thing I saw was the symbol Binetics Corp. before I fell into deep unconsciouseness.

Saturday, July 24, 2010

**ALL NEW**

Sorry for the big capital letters and stars >.> But yeah, its a sort of kind of brand new chapter! :D After 9 and 10 would be the Joseph- Stones, crap whatever aisle, where he meets the three main characters and gets his powers. Now we've got the strongest elements under our control, Fire, Electricity, Wind, and Earth. So we've gotta have a fight to see who's better <.< Before i spoil the rest, just read

(PS. We don't get to the fight yet, it's just kinda talk >.>)


12. Kyle- Relocated

Chris grinned as he patted the newcomer Joseph on the back, “Thanks for getting us out of there, bud.”

Joseph nodded in response, then held up the crystal sphere, “This thing is awesome.” He brought up a small pillar of stone, lightly grinning as he whispered to himself, “I got Earth, and the Jaycob guy has Wind...”, then turned to me and Chris, “What’re your guys’ powers?”

Chris merely conjured up a fireball in his right hand and tossed it onto Joseph’s stone pillar, starting an unnatural fire atop it. Joseph nodded again in awe then turned to me, “How bout you?”

I grinned as I snapped my fingers and sent a bolt of electricty at the flaming stone pillar, effectively exploding it in a burst of light, "Looks like Thunder trumps Fire."

Chris scoffed, "You wish, Fire beats all your powers."

Jaycob exclaimed, "Wind puts out your Fire!"

"Ever heard of fanning the flames?" he stuck his tongue out.

"Stop bickering like little kids. It's obvious Earth can destroy all your powers; Sand puts out Fire, Rock absorbs Electricity, and Stone resists Wind. So hah!"

"You wanna try that on a more personal level?" I said, grinning evilly, "I'm not sure your body could absorb Electricity for too long."

Jospeh laughed, "I'd just bury you."

Jaycob chimed in, "Not if I distracted you."

I grinned at Jaycob for the backup, then turned to Chris, "You joining in on the Jospeh massacre?"

He waved a hand at me as he turned away and began texting, "One minute"

I rolled my eyes and sighed heavily as I turned towards Joseph again, "So me and Jaycob versus you. You sure it's fair?"

He shook his head, "You nead way more guys on your team for it to be fair."

I scoffed and grinned as I got into battle position, "Let's just get this over with."

As we were about to begin our completely harmless war between elements, Chris spoke up, "Uh hey guys? Before you begin this massacre thing, where exactly are we?"

I blinked. Crickets chirped in the distance, although it was midday. A collective "Umm...." was the eventual answer.

He sighed and nodded, "I'll catch you guys later, I gotta go look around for some kinda landmark or street or something."

We turned back to each other, "Think we should go help?" asked Joseph.

I nodded, "As soon as we're done here."

"Bring it on" Jospeh grinned.

And brought it hath been.

Saturday, July 3, 2010

The New Chapters 9 and 10

I tweaked and edited nearly All of the chapters a little bit, but the changes aren't really noticeable until chapter 9, and especially the completely new chapter 10. After 10 would be a slightly edited 11, the one where Joseph found the group for the first time, via the bathroom elevator. The story so far is that my character went right and got Fire powers, Kyle and Jaycob went left, and ended up captured, and Joseph's eartquake of doom in the bathroom part already happened, though he hasn't appeared again yet. So this is right after "Chris- An Inferno Is Born", where i got my powers (also slightly edited, but not much different than the original)
So enjoy.


9. Jaycobb- The Wind is Awakened

I heard a loud rumble, shaking the table I lay on. As I attempted to get up, I noticed I was completely strapped to it, unable to even move my head. From what I could see, there was another kid on a table beside me, and a huge machine in front of me. A man was frantically pressing buttons on it, and alarms rang throughout the room. I could hear the man grumbling to himself, "Need to avoid system meltdown... Would destroy the whole machine... Somebody must've taken the crystal... Can't work without it... Master will be most displeased..."

Suddenly, I heard an explosion, and saw blasted metal debris fly across the room. A large chunk of metal knocked out the mad scientist guy, Hope Frankenstein hasn't come back to kill his creator... But then I saw him, surrounded in flames. I should've completely scared, but instead I felt immense relief. That guy looked so cool... After freeing the other guy, he walked over to me, which is when I noticed they were the two students I was following earlier! After removing the straps, I got up and looked around me. It was obviously some kind of experimentation room, including a giant mirror wall, which I could only guess was a one way window.

"Thanks, man, I owe you one." I said to the fire-wielding cool guy.
He grinned and nodded, "Don't mention it. What's your name?"
"Jaycobb" I responded.
He nodded "I'm Chris, this is Kyle" and gestured towards the other guy.

Suddenly the alarms, which had stopped after the explosion, began ringing once again. Soldiers rushed into the room from the previously exploded opening and began shooting at us. Immediatly we ducked down, with the fire guy occasionally shooting fireballs back at them. Beside him was a peculiar-looking crystal sphere. I picked up the curious object and began examining it. I saw my face in the sphere, which was suddenly replaced by a strong breeze. Suddenly, I felt power surging into my body, flowing through me. As i aimed my palm up, I could feel the wind rushing out of my hand. That's when I grinned.

I stood up, knowing bullets were coming at me. And then I did a Neo, completely stopping all of the bullets in midair, then dropping them to the floor. The soldiers stopped shooting and merely gaped at me with wide eyes. I grinned brighter as I shot a blast of air at them, knocking them all off their feet, then looked to my new comrades.
"Let's go!" I yelled to them as I ran out of the room, before the soldiers could recover.

We came out to a hallway, and quickly chose to go right, due to Chris's incessant nagging about it being the "right" way or something. Though Kyle seemed to agree with him. I could only hope that this was truly the "right" way.

10. Kyle-Thunderstorm Appears

"Really, right is always the 'Right' way. If you go left, then you're going the wrong way, because it's not right. Kyle here knows all about that, doesn't he, Kyle?" said Chris as we continued walking down the hallway.
"I didn't even choose right, you said we had to split up, or some shit like that." I replied in irritation.
"Details, details" scoffed Chris.
Jaycob groaned from beside him, "Please stop ittt, you two're giving me a headache!"
"Alright fine, let's talk about you. How'd you get caught up in this mess anyways?" questioned Chris.
Jaycob hesitated a bit as he responded, "Umm.. well.. yeah.. about that.."
Chris rolled his eyes and demanded, "C'mon, spill it, Mr. Jaycob."
"I followed you down the underground path from the school." he said.
Chris laughed softly as he raised an eyebrow, "Oh really? Well, you sir, Mr. Jaycob, are indeed an idiot."
Jaycob scoffed, "No more an idiot than you" and grinned.
Chris grinned back, but before he could come up with a witty response, there was a loud rumbling.
Which reminded me... "Hey guys, can I see the crystal? I asked them.
"For what?" asked Jaycob, who was carrying it right now.
"Just to see if I get any powers. Whatever's making this rumbling noise is big, and you're gonna need as much power as you can get."
Jaycob nodded and passed the crystal sphere to me. As soon as I grasped it, I could its power rushing into me. I felt a shock in my hand, a little tingle which soon crawled up my arm and around my body before flowing into me. I could feel the new power inbued in me, and it was a lot more than a tingle. As i snapped my fingers, I created a spark. A spark of electricity. Awesome, i thought. And it probably would've been awesome-er if the ground hadn't kept rumbling under my feet. I felt dirt falling from above me, and as I looked up, I noticed the ceiling was quite ready to crush us.
As we jumped out of the way, we noticed something in a porcelian color. I couldn't believe my eyes, but it was a bathroom stall, which was still hovering slightly above the ground. After a few seconds, it landed on the ground with a loud thunk! I was completely and utterly in shock.

Saturday, June 12, 2010

Funny Little Extra (FLE) 1- A Little Change of Destiny

I whistled happily as I strolled down the school hallway. I continued strolling down the hallway 'til I saw a young man, Joseph, whom I noticed was not carrying a hall pass.

"I'm sorry about this, son, but could you go back to class and ask the teacher for a hall pass? Tell 'em the principal sent you"

He nodded quietly and went back to his classroom. I smiled at the obedience of my students. Suddenly, I felt a rumbling in my gut. Sounds like potty time.

I hummed happily as I walked into the bathroom and opened one of the stalls. Before I could sit down, the stall door closed, by itself. I tried to open it, but it was stuck. And then the ground itself was rumbling loudly. That's when the stall began to move, similar to an elevator, but a lot more rumbly-er. I screamed for help as it moved down, straight down through the ground. I closed my eyes tightly and began counting to three repeatedly, while muttering to myself, "If I can't see her, she can't see me, if I can't see her, she can't see me, if I can't..."
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I walked back to the bathroom after getting a pass from my teacher. As I walked into the room, I noticed one of the stalls completely missing, with only a hole in the ground where it should be. I shrugged and used the one next to it, then whistled happily as I washed my hands and walked out of the room.

(Doo da doo dle Yup. I dunno >.>)

Tuesday, June 8, 2010

Re-edited story

Wow, I really have to edit this story to make it fit with the plot. Alright peoples, forget everything you've read about the Elemental Story, cuz I'm revamping it a lot, and this time, I have an actual plot! :D Off I go to edit (though a couple chapters won't be changed much, some other chapters will be completely changed, or altogether removed, and new chapters may also be added.)
Hopefully I'll get started on actually writing new parts to the story soon, after I finish re-editing. That's a word, right? Re-edit? Editing something over again? Maybe? >.> I dunno, i dun wanna thinks about teh schooly type places rite nowz <.<-

Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Kyle- I Went the Wrong Way [Edited]

Darkness. More darkness. Darkness was all I could see. I tried to remember what had happened, and when this darkness had started, but I was unable to. Suddenly, the darkness disappeared, replaced by a blinding light. When my vision returned, I found myself in a heavenly garden, surrounded by a bright shining aura. There were a group of kids running around, having fun, completely unaware of my presence. As I looked closely at one of them, I noticed he seemed redder than the rest. Upon further inspection, I realized he was on fire! At that moment, the dream ended, but the last thing I noticed was incredibly odd.
The flaming kid extremely resembled Chris.

A new light shone upon me, though this one did not seem heavenly at all. My memory was slowly coming back as my eyes re-dilated to the new light. I remember now.. Me and Chris had decided to go our separate ways in order to cover more ground... but when I reached a ladder going downwards, I was ambushed and drugged. But where was I now?

I tried to look around, but my head was strapped to the metal bed that held me. My arms were both restrained as well. I could see the room clearer now; apparently I was hooked up to some kind of machine. There was also another kid beside me, tied to his bed as well. Suddenly, a man stepped into my field of view. I heard him chuckle darkly. “Your powers will soon be mine... you fool. Hehehe..”

Jaycobb- The Unseen Follower [Edited]

I stared with wide eyes as two of my classmates revealed a hidden trapdoor behind the wall. To my astonishment, they bravely walked in, one right after the other. I stepped over to the trapdoor, deliberating over whether or not I should venture into the new area, or just continue about my day, as if nothing had happened. Finally, my curiosity won out and I stepped down into the darkness.

I could see nothing in this darkness, but I could feel a wall behind me, and two walls leading directly ahead. Shrugging lightly, I decided to walk forward, hopefully following behind the other two. Not many people would enjoy being alone in a dark hallway, and I wasn’t one of them. In fact, I would much rather be upstairs preparing for my next class... getting ready for that test... hopefully getting a good gra- My thoughts suddenly came to a halt as I ran face first into a wall.

The path split off in two directions here. I’m guessing they each went in a different direction… Eeny meeny miney MOE! I chose left and ran blindly before I could change my mind. Eventually, I found a ladder and a light peeking out of a hole that led to deeper ground. Mustering up all the courage I had, I slowly climbed down, step by step. I wasn’t exactly friends with heights. When I reached the bottom, I yelled aloud, “Freedom!”. As I turned around, I was immediately silenced. Before I could react, a man drugged me with a handkerchief. I was in darkness once more.

Joseph- Basement Floor, Rocks, Stones, and Sediment Aisle

It was going to take years of therapy to erase the past few minutes of my life. That was a dream wasn’t it? Yeah I had fallen asleep in class and dreamt that I went to the bathroom and somehow found myself in a bathroom stall disguised as an elevator that led to the deep underground. Yeah, that was the only logical explanation. But then again...

“Do you always use the bathroom as a mode of transportation?” I opened my eyes and found three people staring at me in bewilderment. The one who had spoken waved a hand in front of me, “Yo, you alive?”

I blinked and poked his hand. I was still wondering if it was all real. “Um, yes I’m alive.” Then I nodded to reassure myself, “Very much alive. And very much confused. Can you please tell me what’s going on?”

“Yes, I’m Chris, and that’s Kyle and Jaycob” he said as he pointed to the two guys respectively, “and you’re some guy who used the bathroom as an elevator. What’s your name anyways?”

“My name is Joseph” I answered with wide eyes. I looked around the room, “Where am I?”

“Underground, though you can probably tell from the scenery.”

“Hey, can we use your bathroom to go back to the surface?” asked the one named Kyle.

“Um, I’m not exactly sure how it worked the first time.” I replied.

Then, the one who had remained silent spoke, “Chris, have you completely forgotten about your fire and my wind powers?”

I raised an eyebrow, “Fire and wind powers? Okay, you people are crazy, I’ll find my own way out” As I turned around, I felt a strong breeze pulling me back towards them.

“We’re not kidding”, said Jaycob.

I nodded slowly and walked back to them, “Okie then.. mind telling me how you got these fire and wind powers?”

“I think it came from this” said Jaycob as he handed me a crystal sphere.

As I held it my hand, I could feel an odd power flowing into me from the crystal. The ground began to shake, just like the classroom had shaken before. But this time, the others seemed to be affected as well. Suddenly, the shaking stopped, and I could feel my body become infused with a new power.

Soldiers had just walked into the room. Chris and Jaycob were in fighting position. I closed my eyes and clenched my fists; the ground below the men rose up and surrounded them. I looked towards my new companions and said, “Hold on tight” then looked up at the ceiling. I held up my arm and attempted to pull the ground closer to us, in effect, pulling us toward the surface.

Jaycob- The Wind is Awakened

I heard a sudden scream as I awoke from my dream of a flaming kid. It was then that I noticed I was tied down to an examination table. I tried to move my legs, my arms, my head, but all were strapped to the metal table. I looked out of the corner of my eye and saw another person, most likely the one who screamed.

At that moment, a figure walked into view, chuckling darkly. “Your powers will soon be-“ An explosion from behind him cut off his taunting. I could see metal debris flying around the room from the explosion. At the source of the blast was one of the classmates I was following, who appeared remarkably similar to the kid in my dream, albeit more grown up. He walked over to me and burned through the straps holding me down. He started to run over to the other kid but was then surrounded by an army of soldiers.

He looked around and began randomly shooting fire at them, blasting them across the room. But there were too many of them, and they finally overpowered him; one tackled him to the ground and attempted to restrain his hands with metal cuffs. I looked down and found an odd spherical object. I picked it up and examined it closely, then looked around at the soldiers, who didn’t seem to notice me, or maybe they just didn’t acknowledge me as a threat.

They would soon regret that. As I held the crystal sphere in my hands, I could feel some sort of power flowing through me. A small breeze began running through the room, slowly gaining speed. Objects flew throughout the room as the wind got stronger and stronger. When the soldiers finally noticed it, it was too late.

I gathered up all the wind in the room, focusing it into my clenched fists, then grinned and released it all at once, directly at the soldiers. The gale force blew them all through the far wall, effectively knocking them all out. The only ones who remained were the soldiers who were still trying to hold down the fire kid. Slowly, they became aware that their backup men had been eliminated. The fire kid took advantage of their distraction and shot them off him with another burst of fire.

He looked at me bewilderingly, obviously wondering how I was able to do that. I didn’t quite know myself. Then, he noticed the sphere in my hand and nodded slowly before muttering to himself, “so its not just me...” Louder, he said “Wind guy, find a way outta here, we’ll meet up with you later.”

I shook my head, “I’m not leaving you behind, we need to stick together!”

He saw the determination on my face and nodded before freeing the other teen from his examination table. “My name’s Chris, he’s Kyle, now who are you, and how did you end up here?”

“I’m Jaycob, and I followed you down the underground path.”

He laughed softly, “Well, Mr. Jaycob, you’re an idiot.”

“I’m no more of an idiot than you are” I said with a grin.

He grinned back, “Yes more so than I am, cuz you’re a follower, and I’m a leader” and stuck his tongue out.

At that moment, the ground began to shake, cutting off any remarks I had.
As we looked up, we found the most astonishing sight we had ever seen. A bathroom stall was hovering down towards us, hitting the ground with a loud thunk! I was completely and utterly in shock.

Friday, February 12, 2010

Chris- An Inferno is Born [Edited]

I could feel myself being enveloped by the flames that lapped up against my body. Suddenly, my hands seemed to heat up. I turned my palms upwards and found strange glowing markings running along them in a circular pattern. My back started getting hotter as well, and the bottoms of my feet. Before I could check for any more markings, all of the flames that had previously surrounded me now slipped into the markings on my hands, my back, my feet, which all flowed into my soul.

At that point, my mind fell back into my body with a sudden whoosh of exhilaration. The exhilarating sense was then a mere prelude to the invigoration I felt at that moment. I was infused with a new power. It was at this moment that I realized I had been a few feet off the ground, and suddenly dropped like a stone.

Gently rubbing my head, I got up and attempted to use this newfound power. I thought about fire and stared at my hand, trying to start a fireball. I suddenly felt like an idiot in my endeavor. I didn’t have any fire power, that kind of stuff only happened in fictional stories. As I snapped my fingers in irritation, my hand unexpectedly caught fire. I widened my eyes and shook my hand to put it out. Well, it was more like frantically flapping my hand around until it went out.

It’s real... I thought. I looked down at the crystal, which I had dropped a few moments ago. I picked it up and inspected it further. My face was no longer in the crystal, and neither were the flames that had engulfed my body. I must’ve absorbed the fire...

At that moment, I heard a yell coming from above me. Pocketing the bauble, I immediately ran back to the ladder, and towards my friend, Kyle.

Chris- Woah...Just Woah [Edited]

A short while ago, I had come to a fork in the road, or tunnel actually. I’d chosen to go right, because obviously it’s the Right way, isn’t it? Either way (and I’ll stop with the puns now), I went right and soon came to a hole in the ground, a ladder leading towards deeper, but somehow brighter ground. Shrugging, I boldly, or foolishly, went deeper into the labyrinth.

When I reached the bottom, I found a huge room with an extremely bright diamond shining from the center of it. I ran over to the diamond, making sure no one was around. Just in case, I whistled innocently as I slowly walked the last few feet. A crystal sphere floated above the diamond, inside the light. I stared in wonder and awe at the crystal before taking it out of the light. As I examined it closely, I noticed something odd. What I saw in the crystal ball surprised me.

It was my own face, but it was not reflecting off the glass; it was inside the sphere. Cautiously, I ran my fingers along the circumference of the sphere. After a few seconds, my face disappeared and became a bright flame. The crystal ball still felt unnaturally cold, although the fire raged inside of it.

Suddenly the fire leaped out at my hand from the crystal. Unable to withdraw my hands from the crystal, the flames engulfed my hand. They crawled up my arm and soon enveloped my entire body. Oddly (and thankfully) enough, I was not completely incinerated by the fire, as I should’ve been.

Then I closed my eyes and felt my mind and spirit leave my body. In my mind’s eye, I saw a bright light ahead of me, and as much as I tried, I couldn’t change course away from it. This must be what dying feels like, I thought, as I sighed and prepared for the worst.

Monday, February 8, 2010

Chris- An Inferno is Born

I could feel myself being enveloped by the flames that lapped up against my body. Suddenly, my hands seemed to heat up. I turned my palms upwards and found strange glowing markings running along them in a circular pattern. My back started getting hotter as well, and the bottoms of my feet. Before I could check for any more markings, all of the flames that had previously surrounded me now slipped into the markings on my hands, my back, my feet, which all flowed into my soul.

At that point, my mind fell back into my body with a sudden whoosh of exhilaration. The exhilarating sense was then a mere prelude to the invigoration I felt at that moment. I was infused with a new power. It was at this moment that I realized I had been a few feet off the ground, and suddenly dropped like a stone.

Gently rubbing my head, I got up and attempted to use this newfound power. I thought about fire and stared at my hand, trying to start a fireball. I suddenly felt like an idiot in my endeavor. I didn’t have any fire power, that kind of stuff only happened in fictional stories. As I snapped my fingers in irritation, my hand unexpectedly caught fire. I widened my eyes and shook my hand to put it out. Well, it was more like frantically flapping my hand around until it went out.

It’s real... I thought. At that moment, I heard a yell coming from above me. I immediately ran back to the ladder, and towards my friend, Kyle.

Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Joseph- Earthquake of Doom in the Bathroom

Now I must add in the most generic: Meanwhile....

I tried to pay attention. Really I did. But it was just impossible; Mr. Robertson’s lectures were just too boring. I placed my elbows on my desk, and rested my chin in my hands as I looked somewhat towards the board. At the very least, I was being courteous; two seats over, I could plainly see Joshua slumped over in sleep. Sighing silently, I closed my eyes, hoping no one would notice me sleeping.

Suddenly I felt an earthquake. I immediately straightened up and looked around. The entire room was shaking, but no one seemed to notice it, not even Mr. Robertson who should’ve fallen over because of the tremors. I looked outside and saw the entire world shaking, yet once again, nobody noticed. Across the street, the preschool playground was quivering, yet the little students playing around didn’t seem to feel it either. What was happening?

My view was then blocked by a huge object and I nearly jumped back in fear. “Is there a problem, Joseph? Or are you just not interested by my obviously –riveting- lecture, so much so that you are staring blindly out the window?” said Mr. Robertson.

I looked up at his stern and lightly blushed as I looked down and shook my head, muttering softly, “Sorry, Mr. Robertson, it won’t happen again.”

He nodded triumphantly and walked back to the front of the room to continue his lecture. It must’ve been a dream, I thought and nodded, Yup, completely 100 percent obviously dream- My thoughts stopped as I felt the room trembling once more. I held my stomach, and hopefully my lunch in place as I raised my hand and asked to go to the bathroom.

“Always looking for a way out of class, aren’t you, Joseph? Very well, be gone.” Answered Mr. Robertson.

This was the first time I had ever even left during class... I ran into the bathroom, hoping to clear my head and stop the tremors. Must’ve accidentally sniffed something bad in Art Class or something. At that moment, I heard the toilet flush behind me, yet the door was wide open. I blinked and stepped over to the toilet in curiosity. Something is wrong with me, I thought. As I was about to agree with myself, the door slammed shut on me. I tried to open it and furiously banged on the door, to no avail. What happened next severely stunned me. The entire bathroom stall seemed to be moving, like an elevator. I closed my eyes tightly, wishing it all to stop.

Kyle- I Went the Wrong Way

Darkness. More darkness. Darkness was all I could see. I tried to remember what had happened, and when this darkness had started, but I was unable to. Suddenly, the darkness disappeared, replaced by a blinding light. When my vision returned, I found myself in a heavenly garden, surrounded by a bright shining aura. There were a group of kids running around, having fun, completely unaware of my presence. As I looked closely at one of them, I noticed he seemed redder than the rest. Upon further inspection, I realized he was on fire! At that moment, the dream ended, but the last thing I noticed was incredibly odd.
The flaming kid extremely resembled Chris.

A new light shone upon me, though this one did not seem heavenly at all. My memory was slowly coming back as my eyes re-dilated to the new light. I remember now.. Me and Chris had decided to go our separate ways in order to cover more ground... but when I reached a ladder going upwards, I was ambushed and drugged. But where was I now?

I tried to look around, but my head was strapped to the metal bed that held me. My arms were both restrained as well. I could see the room clearer now; apparently I was hooked up to some kind of machine. There was also another kid beside me, tied to his bed as well. Suddenly, a man stepped into my field of view. I heard him chuckle darkly. “Your powers will soon be mine... you fool. Hehehe..”

Monday, February 1, 2010

Chris- Woah...Just Woah.

A short while ago, I had come to a fork in the road, or tunnel actually. I’d chosen to go right, because obviously it’s the Right way, isn’t it? Either way (and I’ll stop with the puns now), I went right and soon came to a hole in the ground, a ladder leading towards deeper, but somehow brighter ground. Shrugging, I boldly, or foolishly, went deeper into the labyrinth.

When I reached the bottom, I found a huge room with an extremely bright crystal shining from the center of it. I ran over to the crystal, making sure no one was around. Just in case, I whistled innocently as I slowly walked the last few feet. What I saw in the crystal surprised me.

It was my own face. I waved my hand over the crystal, noticing it wasn’t my reflection. I also noticed my face wasn’t the only one there. It was a huge crystal, much larger than I had originally thought. There were a total of 11 faces, though it seemed as if one face was missing; there was a very scratched up spot. As I looked closer at my own face, I saw fire glowing from it, as if it were inside the crystal, underneath my face.

Cautiously, I ran my fingers along the edges of my face; it felt unnaturally smooth, and also very cold, even though there was a fire under it. Suddenly the fire leaped out at my hand from the crystal. I immediately withdrew my hand, but it somehow didn’t hurt. There were no burn marks as I inspected my hand, and the fire in the crystal seemed unaffected. I again placed my hand on the crystal, and the fire engulfed my hand once again. This time, the flames crawled up my arm and soon enveloped my entire body. Oddly (and thankfully) enough, I was not completely incinerated by the fire, as I should’ve been.

Then I closed my eyes and felt my mind and spirit leave my body. In my mind’s eye, I saw a bright light ahead of me, and as much as I tried, I couldn’t change course away from it. This must be what dying feels like, I thought, as I sighed and prepared for the worst.

Friday, January 29, 2010

Jaycob(Only one B, due to the wishes of a certain someone >.>)- The Unseen

I stared with wide eyes as two of my classmates revealed a hidden trapdoor behind the wall. To my astonishment, they bravely walked in, one right after the other. I stepped over to the trapdoor, deliberating over whether or not I should venture into the new area, or just continue about my day, as if nothing had happened. Finally, my curiosity won out and I stepped down into the darkness.

I could see nothing in this darkness, but I could feel a wall behind me, and two walls leading directly ahead. Shrugging lightly, I decided to walk forward, hopefully following behind the other two. Not many people would enjoy being alone in a dark hallway, and I wasn’t one of them. In fact, I would much rather be upstairs preparing for my next class... getting ready for that test... hopefully getting a good gra- My thoughts suddenly came to a halt as I ran face first into a wall.

The path split off in two directions here. I’m guessing they each went in a different direction… Eeny meeny miney MOE! I chose left and ran blindly before I could change my mind. Eventually, I found a ladder and bright light peeking out of a hole in the ceiling. I ran towards my freedom from this dungeon, happy to be escaping the labyrinth. “Freedom!” I yelled as I got out. But what I saw silenced me immediately. Before I could react, he drugged me with a handkerchief. Before blacking out, I heard a gruff voice muttering, "These idiots just keep popping up". Then I was in darkness once more.

Thursday, January 28, 2010

Chris- Mission: Totally Unexpected

I turned towards my new friend-like funny guy person thing. We had both heard the sound coming from the other side of the wall. There was no visible door from this side, so I motioned Kyle to follow, going around the other side of the room. Before turning the corner, I heard a loud bang of a closing door. Mr. Huntrap walked out and adjusted his tie, looking peaceful and professional as he nodded towards us in greeting before walking away.
I raised a brow and turned the corner. There was solid brick covering the room. Even more puzzling, was that there was no door, nothing that could’ve produced that loud bang from before. I saw Kyle quietly running his hand along the brick wall, pressing each brick.
“What are you doing?” I asked inquisitively.
“What the people do in movies, ya know, press the hidden brick and a new way shall open, or some shit like that.” He answered.
I rolled my eyes, “That’s retar-” My reply was cut off as a part of the wall seemed to move back, revealing a trap door in the center of the “room”.
Kyle grinned at me triumphantly as I growled under my breath, “Lets just go”
He nodded smugly and pointed to the trap door, “Ladies first”
I glared and said, “Exactly, you should go”
He laughed softly, “No no, you’re much more suited to go.”
I rolled my eyes, as this was getting us nowhere. “Since neither of us are ladies, I’ll just go first.” I opened up the trap door revealing only empty darkness. I then proceeded to trek down into said darkness. This small step for man could also be one small step into our graves. We were either very brave, or very foolish.

Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Kyle- A New Acquaintance

Should I add more manas, or does my deck need better creatures... Maybe I should use that one artifact... I was once again honing my already near-invincible Magic deck when someone walked in the room, Chris, I think his name was. He seemed a bit stunned and not exactly aware of his surroundings at the moment. Grinning, I took the chance to jump in front of him and yell Boo!
I laughed as he jumped back in extreme surprise. When he recovered, he didn’t hesitate to growl at me. I laughed again, then patted his back, “Don’t worry little buddy, I was just jokin’ around, ya know”
He nodded once, not letting up his relentless glare. He eventually softened up then grinned, “Yeah, that was the most original joke I’ve ever seen” he said sarcastically.
I laughed, “Thank you, but flattery will get you nowhere”
“As far as you know, Mr. OG, Original Geoker”
I grinned and laughed, “That’s the best spelling of Joker I’ve ever seen.” I said mockingly.
He laughed in return, “Thank you, but flattery will get you nowhere” in the same mocking voice as me, grinning.
I laughed again, I liked this guy’s sense of humor.
Suddenly I heard a noise from the room next to ours. I turned to look at Chris, wondering if he had heard it. When I saw his perplexed expression imitating my own, I knew it wasn’t my imagination.

Monday, January 25, 2010

Chris- Some Kind Of Ghost, Maybe

3, 2, 1, briiiiiing! Sounded the lunch bell. All the other students left in a rush, but I stayed behind, smiling at the nice score I received on a recent test.
“With this last test, my final grade is now an A” I said, to no one in particular. But someone else overheard, “You like to brag about your educational achievements?”
I blinked and turned to face the speaker, then scoffed, “Of course not”
He laughed once, then said, “Is that so?”
I nodded defiantly, “’Tis so.”
He laughed again and nodded back, “Alright noob, cya around.”
I frowned and shouted a bit, running after him, “Hey wait!”
He stopped, “What?”
“What’s your name?”
He answered simply, “Nolberto. Goodbye.” He waved, then walked down towards the cafeteria.
I tilted my head in thought, How odd…. I’ve never seen him around before.. I shrugged, “Oh well, whatever, I’m probably never gonna see him.”
“Are you talking about me, noob?” he was suddenly behind me and I turned to face him again in surprise, “No of course not!” I said, shaking my head.
He grinned and laughed more, “Alright then, cya”
I growled lightly under my breath as I picked up my stuff and ran upstairs to my next class, totally skipping lunch.

Wednesday, January 20, 2010

Intro/Prologue

It was a normal day of high school. Sound generic, eh? Alright then, it was a normal day at Bioscience. Oh, thats much less generic. Well anyways, dear reader, I present you with the story of a handful of teens who were much more than they appeared to be. On the outside, they were all seemingly normal teenagers; school, friends, work, family, stress, fun. But on the inside, they were something completely different. They were much more special than the other kids, and they were about to unlock their full potential..

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

2 Questions, please answer

So the attributes thing, got no answers on that subject, i'd really like your opinion por favor? o.o

Should we be animals? :D I had good ideas for the animals i think we should be, but I think the story would make more sense as a human >.>

Thursday, January 14, 2010

Welcome's!

Hey, I hope I attracted as many of you people as I could, seeing as how I told people from facebook and blogger and stuff. Anyways, this is the Elemental Story, I've been thinking about writing something like this for a while. Its probably gonna include more than a few people from school, or at least the ones that I communicate with on a somewhat daily or weekly-ish basis. If for any reason, you don't want to be included in the story, tell me and I'll respect your privacy and not include you. I actually think I'm supposed to ask if I can include you before I do, but I wanna get started ASAP. Besides, I'm not going to disrespect anyone (with due justice in return), and I hope that I don't portray you guys in the wrong way. If you have any problems with how I represented you, I'll be sure to fix it up as soon as I can, I swear.

Now then, I'll post some information stuff about the story (elements, attributes, etc) and maybe even on the characters themselves (Us! :D) tomorrow, or sometime this week. Soon as I finish dividing up the elements and attributes. which also brings me to one of my questions: A while ago, I lost my- er, my notebook was lost, and all the info I had was gone with it. I have attributes like, speed, strength, wisdom, courage, honor, and some other ones i forget, and I wanted to know if I should divide them up among the Elemental Heroes or among other people that I could include from real life into the story, and might teach the Elemental Heroes their attributes or something, I dunno. I could make it either way, with the Elemental possessing the skills naturally or learning it from others. But I think it should be up to you guys, it could either be jut main characters from real life, or even a bunch of supporting characters.

Well thank you for your time, and I hope to post soon ^_^ (Oh and also, please follow this blog, if you want, please? >.<)